L oves
A nimals
U nderstanding
R eads well
E njoys
N ights at Jade's house
This and the one below are samples I used in my classroom for this type of poem.
Wednesday, April 22, 2009
Student Comments
Since most of my student do not have access to after school Internet, and our parish would not open the blog site, my students all typed comments about the blog and activities relating to the technology class. I copied and pasted them onto the blog...
mrs. amy can we do more stories on the computer and show them to other classes?
Robert
I like the poems Miss Amy they are fun to do.
Daniel
I hated poems they are dum.
Carlvontonio
We really really really like to drew the pitures for the book.
Cedric
Can I still come to your house and look at the stuff on the computer I want to help you do more Miss Amy ok Miss Amy
JaLeshia
Ryan- I like your computer at your house mrs Amy. Can I come back and see it one more time? Please miss Amy
love ryan
I had fun doing it all.
Keith
I hope we do it again next year miss amy.
kevin
I want to do another story one.
Stantrez
Will you ask my mom if I can have my own computer so I can do my own photostory thing
Deterion
I had fun with all of them, but my favorite was the map with the pictures we did for the poems.
Brent
it was ok
JAMARIO
some people are scared of funny things Mrs. Amy.
keroscious
Are you still going to put the poems in a book for us?
Donald
Doing this was more fun than working.
DAngelo
As you can tell, my class had mixed reactions to the projects. Although my blog was based on the Poetry unit, we used concept maps, photostory, and some even did a podcast of their poems. I tried to upload pics of them working, but for some reason my blog would not except them. I know this is the last day for our blogs, but I will continue to upload to it and keep trying to put pics on it. I print the new posts for my students to take home to their parents. We include other things in the "class paper" and the parents seem to enjoy it. We are putting our poems into a photostory and it will be played at 5th grade's Honors Day Program!
mrs. amy can we do more stories on the computer and show them to other classes?
Robert
I like the poems Miss Amy they are fun to do.
Daniel
I hated poems they are dum.
Carlvontonio
We really really really like to drew the pitures for the book.
Cedric
Can I still come to your house and look at the stuff on the computer I want to help you do more Miss Amy ok Miss Amy
JaLeshia
Ryan- I like your computer at your house mrs Amy. Can I come back and see it one more time? Please miss Amy
love ryan
I had fun doing it all.
Keith
I hope we do it again next year miss amy.
kevin
I want to do another story one.
Stantrez
Will you ask my mom if I can have my own computer so I can do my own photostory thing
Deterion
I had fun with all of them, but my favorite was the map with the pictures we did for the poems.
Brent
it was ok
JAMARIO
some people are scared of funny things Mrs. Amy.
keroscious
Are you still going to put the poems in a book for us?
Donald
Doing this was more fun than working.
DAngelo
As you can tell, my class had mixed reactions to the projects. Although my blog was based on the Poetry unit, we used concept maps, photostory, and some even did a podcast of their poems. I tried to upload pics of them working, but for some reason my blog would not except them. I know this is the last day for our blogs, but I will continue to upload to it and keep trying to put pics on it. I print the new posts for my students to take home to their parents. We include other things in the "class paper" and the parents seem to enjoy it. We are putting our poems into a photostory and it will be played at 5th grade's Honors Day Program!
Bio Poems
LAST NAMES (LAST LINE) ARE LEFT OFF TO ENSURE STUDENTS PRIVACY
Robert
Touchy, good, caring, & friendly
son of Paula
Who loves Chicken, Mom,Dad, and siblings
Who feels dizzy, crazy,Woozy, and lonely
Who fears snakes, sharks, sting rays, & bulls
Who one 1st place in 2008 Field day races
Who wants to explore a volcano
Who lives in Homer
Brent
friendly, careful, and talkative
Member of Ebenezer Baptist Church
Who loves his family, friends,& football
Who feels loved and cared for, but sad
Who fears hurricanes and sting rays
Who has won an essay contest
Who wants to go to space
Who lives in Homer
Jamario
loving, careful, & thankful
son of Sheila, member of 4-H
who loves mom, neices, & Granny
who feels passion & love
who fears snakes, heights, & black cats
who has earned a 1st place medal
who dreams of being a movie star
who lives in Homer
Keroscious
funny, playful, silly
son of Cordney, sister of Meshunta
who loves his sister, mom, & dog
who fears cats, sharks, squirrels, & snakes
who feels silly and loved
who has won a trophy in basketball
who would like to see the ocean & Steeler's play
who lives in Homer
CARL
ROUGH & PLAYFUL
SON OF BARBRA
WHO LOVES SPORTS
WHO FEELS MAD & SAD
WHO FEARS DOGS, BEES, & RATS
WHO KNOWS BASEBALL
WHO WANTS TO BE A COMEDIAN IN OHIO
WHO LIVES IN HOMER
ryan
happy, friendly, funny
who is a 5th grade student
who loves mom, dad, & jim
who feels loved and cared for
who fears spiders & heights & death
who has won a trophy in a state football game
who would like to see the bottom of the ocean & Heaven
who lives in Homer
Donald
Good, Funny, Playful
Who is the oldest twin & brother
Who loves his Family and Football
Who feels Love, Passion, & Sadness
Who fears Mom's Death & BLACK CATS
Who wants to see a White Tiger & a Ninja
Who lives in Homer
D'Angelo
careful, quiet, easygoing
student of Mrs. Jones & Mrs. Amy
who loves my mom, dad, & my phone
who feels hurt, lonely, & my phone
who fears sharks, earthquakes, & volcanos
who wants to go to Ohio
who lives in Homer
Keith
Happy & Friendly
Who is a student of Mrs. Amy
Who cares for my family
Who feels loved & cared for
Who has a fear of death
Who has won a football trophy
Who wants to see a lion
Who lives in Homer
Wednesday, April 15, 2009
Spring Break
Hope everyone is having a wonderful break. For thoes of you who have not been to my house yet, Krystal had her baby. She is planning on bringing her to see the class sometime next week. Remember during the holiday, you are supposed to finish your shape poem. We will definitely be posting our poems next week. I am excited about our poetry book! Presentations were great and now that the iLEAP is under our belt, it is time to have some real fun. Have a great rest of the week.
Saturday, April 4, 2009
Hope you are all having a wonderful weekend. Don't forget to have your shape and fruit poems ready for revision on Tuesday. Parents, we will be posting some of our work on the blog site!! I sent all of you the link, feel free to comment on our classroom blog. We are still having trouble at school getting to the blog, but as I have told you, anytime you would like to come to my place to view it, you are welcome to. A special "THANK YOU" to my group that participated in the photostory project. We had a great time doing it, so much so that we have planned another one for after Spring Break. Have a great weekend, and I will see you on Monday!! Oh, for all of you who have been asking, no, we still don't have a baby!!! Hopefully soon!!
ILEAP
Thank you for your hard work on the poems. Our poetry booklet is comeing along wonderfully!!! It has been a stressful week with the ILEAP and I hope writing the funny shape and fruit poems took your minds off of the stress. We will be publishing some of our poems to our classroom blog next week. A special "THANK YOU" to the students who participated in the photostory project. It was so much fun that I am planning for us to do another one! Remember to have your shape poems finished and ready to revise for Monday and your fruit poem ready for Tuesday. Spring break begins Friday!
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